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Comment on The Exquisite ‘Ku by fayfran

fayfran — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 16:03:35 +0000

fashionably late
arriving at the party -
these glass slippers hurt

Lunar North — Sun, 05 Sep 2010 22:35:02 +0000

repainting their nails
“look at me” orange, suff’ring
fashionably

Deb-Anuli — Wed, 01 Sep 2010 00:51:48 +0000

“Where’s the Ku writers,”
you ask. Too busy…perhaps,
repainting their nails.

roman — Tue, 24 Aug 2010 21:07:57 +0000

new chapter begins
hesitantly, it would seem
where’s the Ku writers?

Terry Pearce — Wed, 18 Aug 2010 12:06:39 +0000

turns, the canvas white;
about face, slate clean once more;
new chapter begins

R,om,a'n — Sun, 08 Aug 2010 09:43:39 +0000

contemplates a peach
painting it in reverse, he
turns the canvas white

Roman — Thu, 05 Aug 2010 00:12:10 +0000

organic pleasures
are lost on the robot who
contemplates a peach

A. Roche — Fri, 30 Jul 2010 15:01:49 +0000

but yours always wins
clockwork symmetry trumps my
organic pleasures

romaN — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 03:09:31 +0000

my creation — life!
versus your creation, death …
but yours always wins

fayfran — Mon, 26 Jul 2010 20:33:16 +0000

Frankenstein method:
pound on the chest and scream “give
my creation life!”